hitman reborn: The promise land

(first thing first i promise this one will be longer and have better grammer, ill post the new and slightly improved characters)

this one is gonna be an intresting one. more intresting then the first one i mean

(yeah the last one was like a character intro this one is gonna be better ten fold i promise :3 )

name: Nathan Aurèle Deveaux (thxz wendy)
apperence: http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7164/6473959261_fe3833dd0d_b.jpg
age: 16
family: none yet (vongola later on)
flame: lightning
job: Namimori High School (i am guessing there is cuz hibari would never leave middle school if there wasn't XD)
power level: speed 9/10 -- strength 10/10 -- flame 8/10 -- combat ability 7/10 -- reflexes 8/10 stamina 9/10 -- defense 9/10 -|max: 60)
Box animal: http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs9/i/2006/064/6/6/Koi___Betta_hybrid_fish_by_kittahxd.jpg named Mello she is surrounded in lightning flames (similar to how basil's dolphin and squalo's shark are surrounded by rain flames)
personality: kind, caring, calm, can't stay angry at most people for too long, and is just about the only person that can stop his sister when she is in raged.
history: he was ignored by his parents as a child for being good enough or that is what he was told by kids at school the reason was. the things he loved to do most were drawing and spending time with his sister who always complemented his art, so he drew lots of pictures for her. as he got older he realized what his parents were doing was wrong, but he never resented his sister for it. as he was drawing one day he over herd his parents talking about sending him away. when there parents told his sister she yelled at them telling them that they were horrible parents and yelled at them at the top of her lungs, after she called there aunt who always remembered him, and got him things for his birthday and christmas two and not just his sister like most of there relatives. so after they got on a plane to namimore to live with there kind aunt.
crush: none yet.

name: Liliane Cyrille Deveaux (thxz windy)
appearance: http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7160/6473959627_988cd790d1_z.jpg
age: 18
family: none yet. (vongola later on)
flame: storm.
job: Namimori High school
power level: speed 10/10 -- strength 9/10 -- flame 6/10 -- combat ability 9/10 -- reflexes 8/10 stamina 5/10 -- defense 6/10 -|max: 63)
Box animal: main box animal: http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs7/i/2005/191/2/5/Iguana_by_IsisMasshiro.jpg with storm flame spikes his name is Bana
personality: she is very short tempered and tends to blow up at just about everyone. she is not tolerable to any one her trys to mess with the people she likes/finds close enough towards her. she is also a sore loser.
history: as a child she was almost all ways the best in what she did: sports, school, and even music. ether parents praised her and showered her with gifts and anything she would want for this, but when she got older she saw that her parents were ignoring her brother. so in there stead she took care of praised and even practicably raised her brother. years after her parents saw her do this and told her to just leave him alone for because they were going to send him away, but before that could happens she called the only person knew would take the both of them in without telling there parents, there aunt. there aunt from there mothers side had a long sibling rivalry but, still allays sent chirstmas and birthday presents to the both of them so liliane knew that she cared for them. after they called there aunt, she said she would order plane tickets for them so they could move from france to japan so they would be safe with her. now she lives a life in namimori with her aunt and brother.
crush: none yet.
extra: the only person she really cares about is her brother.
weapon: http://konachan.com/sample/e81ac5c50d02289c782d619f8156c551/Konachan.com%20%20121478%20sample.jpg http://konachan.com/sample/08285e3c7b90fe0636d95783eed3b763/Konachan.com%20-%20121477%20sample.jpg the gloves they reach up to her elbow. the blade is kind of similar to the weapon adelheid used against hibari. http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ljn8drKKXW1qdwhm2o1_500.png but the blade is smaller thinner and cresent shaped

name: anonn (he doesnt use his last name anymore)
age: 18 (year older den daughter)
apperence: http://cdn.pimpmyspace.org/media/pms/c/ai/lz/0n/93423.jpg (dyed his hair)
family: vongola
flame: cloud (it was sky before so he can still use it but it is painfull to use)
job: boss canidate, he went to twin dragon high (yeah diffrent cause because they moved to a diffrent part of japan but moves back)
power level: speed 10/10 | strength 10/10 | flame 9/10...10/10 | combat ability 9/10 | 10/10 | 8/10 | defence 9/10 = 65... 69
box animal: a bird but turns into a hawk with cloud flames
personlty: he is like hibari in many ways but cares for other peoples lifes sometimes
history: after tsuna left the child to hibari he was trianed since the age of 3, he could easy minipulate sky flames by 10 but at 11 he wanted to be cloud gardian so hirbari did some reasurch and found away to convert flames but it was a very painful process, annon isnt the best with cloud flames but is getting there .
WEAPON: two deasert egeals with the cloud symbol and the word vongola on it, the bulets are counted with cloud flames and can multiply or change directions. he now also has a purple Katana which was forged just for him and only he can use it.

name:esperimento (Esper for short) (thxz holmes)
age: he is 21 but he looks like a baby)
appearance: http://mob276.photobucket.com/albums/kk5/babyblue49n8/anime%20pics/th_babyboy.jpg
guardian element: the moon
weapon: His pet dog can turn into things.
likes: to show off, being importent.
dislikes: being ignored, being a baby, the experiment that was done on him.
strengths: he is the only person to have the element of the moon, due to the fact that it was the experiment that corrupted his original element turning it to it's opposite.
weakness: he is weak against people with the sun element.
personality: Pretty happy at most times, but he can be dark and brooding when his other self takes over.
history: He was a young Vangola spy when he heard about the power enhancing experiments that where going to be done. when he signed up he was chosen to be the first artificial Rainbow pacifier wielder, he was supposed to have the sun element, but what they had done was unnatural, it caused the power of the sun to reject Him and destroy his memory, he still knows basic things, and has basic memories like the fact that he went to school at one point, but he doesn't remember his name or the names of places he has been. the unnatural experiment caused the creation of an Opposite element, the moon element.
power level: 70

name: alex antonio (thxz knightmare)
age: 20
apperance: http://m125.photobucket.com/image/cool%20anime%20guys%20with%20swords/je3n/Hot%20anime%20boys/Guy-1.gif.html?src=www
family: vongolo
flame: mist
job: owner of antonio industries (a merchandising and advertising agency)
power: strength: 8 , speed 10: , flame: 10 ,combat abbility: 9 , reflexes: 7 ,stamina:5 , defense: 5 , total: 64
box animal: a cat that turns into a panther
personality: nice, genourous
history:when he was 10 he decided to make videos and merchandise. then he turned into a buisness and became a millionare.
crush:none
extra:
weapon: two black and gold hilted katanas with mist in a hassy gray imprited on both, he is know a skilled illutionist

name: reborn
age:28 (hes no longer cursed)
apperence: you know it already
family: Artez
flame: ocean
job: artez tutor/assasian
powerlevel: speed: 10/10 | strength 10/10 | flame 10/10 | combat abilty 10/10 | refelexes 10/10 | stamina 10/10 | defence 10/10= 70
box animal: leo (not in a box)
personality: hes a really nice guy but you would do best not to get on that side, but tsuna does.
history: he wouldnt let us know
extra: he is and expert at just about everything, he carries a uzi glock and leo

Robert arty
age: 18
apperence: http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_Hmvqx2TQ0ik/SwwGCBXU7pI/AAAAAAAABDA/xsJyC5IYbEE/s1600/The-Prince-anime-guys-6695445-966-823.jpg
family: vongola
flame: ocean (like rain but stronger)
job: rain/ocean gardian/ high school student
power level: strength: 10 | speed: 10 | flame: 7 | combat abilty: 10 | reflexes: 9 | stamina: 8 | |defence: 8 = 63
box animal: a blue snake with teeth coated with ocean flame
personality: he laid back and wants to be ocean gardian no matter what but hes known amy for a while so it should be no problem
history: he had been trianed in kunfu and judo since 5 and is pretty much a pro at using his spear also, he had always been favored by his father who has close conetion to the vongola.
weapon: http://m626.photobucket.com/image/silver%20spear/Inpw/Comicon%202009/Inpw_WIP05.jpg.html?src=www

harold
age: 16
apperence: http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_Hmvqx2TQ0ik/SwwDn9EFUJI/AAAAAAAABAI/pdcn3yzc8Mg/s1600/manga-guy-anime-guys-6785890-362-502.jpg
family; vongola
flame:sun
job: sun gardian/ high school student
power level: strength: 10 | speed: 9 | falme: 9 | combat abilty: 10 | reflexes: 10 | stamina: 6 | defence: 9 = 63
box animal: a pigon with sun flames
personality: he is kind hearted but rushess into things a little to much some times
history: a normal life either then being trianed to fight dirty or clean all his life
weapon: his fists that get ignighted with sun flames, he also can turn the flames into blades coming out of his body

name: amy (she also doesnt use her last name) (forgot to put this one)
apperence: http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/12/moe95541sample.jpg/
age: 16
family:vongola
flame: sky
job: student, boss canidate
power level: speed: 10 | strength: 10 | flame: 8 | combat abilty: 8 | reflexes: 9 | stamina: 9 | defence: 6= 64
Box animal: a dog that turns into a wolf
personlity: she is a cheery person and values other peoples lifes as reborn had told her two, she nows of her brothers excistence and even has a picture, she knows nothing of the mafia
history: after being given to reborn she was treated as a normal rich kid, she rarley got hurt and never got into fights, when reaching 11 years old they were attacked, but she was told it was a robbery, she always wanted to know who her father really was.
chrush: Nathan
extra:
WEAPONS: gloves with the roman numerails for 1. she also has throwing knifes which can be ignighted with sky flame

name:hades
age:19
family: non
job: bartender/hitman
flame:hells flame (black with a orange glow)
power: 70
box animal: he destroyed it
history: he was one of the worlds most talented hitman with the sky flame at one point he was even thought to become the new boss but tsuna dimissed it knowing niether of his children would be able to beat him so he had his flame changed by ressurecting him after killing him. this resulted in the hell flame although no one knows how he was put in record as exmeriment two.
weapon: the hell flame has a high destrutive capablity but he carries around a red katana.

“Shit if I’m late they’ll kill me” Amy said to herself while running to school “how can I be late and be the discipline committee president” she said before ramming into the doors both of the flinging open making indents on the wall. She ran faster and faster making lefts and rights until she reached her destination her office. She stopped at the door and thought of everything that happened in the year and a half. She missed reborn and she missed Annon too but he decided to leave so he could train, to think he’s most likely somewhere in Africa wrestling wild animals. She couldn’t really think of any other way for him to be as strong as he was back then. Then she began thinking about reborn, he had been with her since year one after her dad dumped her on him. The two had so many good memories but he has been branded as a traitor after the ‘incident’. She pushed those thoughts aside and stepped into her office where Liliane, Nathan, Robert and Harold waited for her.
“what the hell took you so long” Liliane said pulling on Amy’s long blond hair then moving her reach to her left ear almost yanking it off her head “GET HERE ON TIME!!” she yelled into it. That kind of blast would make a person deaf but then again Amy got this just about every day.
Nathan put his hand on his sister’s shoulder “ok I think she gets it she’ll be early next time, right Amy??” Nathan turned towards here with his sunny attitude face. Liliane shrugged and muttered something under her breath. She wasn’t in the happiest mood because Amy dumped Dc work on her saying that she had to do vongola boss stuff but she knew that Amy was probably just training some more. That’s all she ever did after the ‘incident’. She could remember it well it was the second time in her life she was thrown around like some cheap children’s rag doll. She really thought she had gotten stronger but it was a reality check, in a world with people like hades and reborn she was nothing but trash. “He why are you zoning out??” Liliane snaps back to her senses.
“Oh I was thinking about stuff” she said sighing looking at the window not really caring about anything else at the moment she was dead tired too “I always wondered this but why would he do it?? He trained the current boss and is so close to everyone, he has all the money and power he needs and everyone loves him. So why do that to everyone” Liliane says grabbing her side any memories of that day made it hurt.
Nathan shrugged changing the topic, he couldn’t remember much of it because he was hit on the head “what ever happened to your boyfriend Annon he just disappeared” Liliane snapped because ever since she tried to stop him from leaving last year everyone thought she was confessing her love but the truth was that they need him, he lead them more then Amy and he was the strongest out of the pack. So she only found it reasonable for the whole group to want him to stay he was there life line.
“You to Nate!!” Liliane cried or yelled you could never tell the difference between the two with her “I told you guys that I just wanted him to stay.”
Harold butts in “because you love him” he put both of his hands on his checks squishing them together then moving his hips back and forth, but he was stopped by Robert chopping him in the head he rubbed his head wondering what that was for but as he looked outside the window he knew. About three guys were tearing up the yard causing fights and yelling.

“Come on and stop us your all fucked when out boss gets here” he screamed out in the air, these guys were yakuza coming to challenge the vongola, lately they were gaining popularity again it seems the last time vongola crushed them wasn’t enough. Amy jumped out of the window her eyes turning silver she didn’t need to use her flame against these low class morons. She landed and dashed towards the first one pushing her palm onto his chest, you could feel the air pop around her palm and the man was sent flying into a nearby tree, the other man quickly tried to jab a knife at Amy’s head but she tilted it to the right and grabbed his wrist pulling him over her shoulder and onto the ground followed by her twisting his arm un arming him. A bullet zoomed past her and she rolled on the ground with the knife in hand “so you must be the vongola brat” he said opening fire but is stopped because Nathan had electrocuted him.
“Well that wasn’t hard I swear they just pick random people to join yakuza now a days” Amy said her eyes turning blue once again well that was easy. She said but then was hit with a hard back arm, it was delivered by him (http://api.ning.com/files/*n2Mp3oS64pNRZoi9MenTaH4-ODhW6nj6e*RTcDtPOj8T1b7h3vIZTsTZp**bdD8R0njGkpdAvYrDQUOujaaebbxBGW9m52M/GuyAngel3.jpg)
“I can’t have little girls hurting my men can I” he says smiling his hand covered with ocean flame. Nathan charges at him with a punch but his wrist is caught and he is flipped, you could hear a loud thud on the ground. He proceeds to too press his foot on Nathans shoulder blade but is stopped by a wave of storm flames; he jumps out of the way and ducks from a spear being jabbed at his head from behind and then blocks a kick but is slightly cut both sides of his neck are met with blades “oh looks like I’m in a sticky situation” he says with a smile on his face, suddenly an impulse of ocean flames pushes them back as Nathan and Amy get up. He charges at Amy but is stopped by Liliane jumping in the way slashing at him. He dodges all of them with no effort and then kicks Liliane in the face but at the same time his arm gets slightly cut “ow that hurt” he says laughing after wards not a creepy one, one that you would hear after a joke is told, that kind of laugh “well I’ll see you later”. He said jumping into the air as a whirl pool surrounds him and then it’s gone he had disappeared.
“Wow the yakuza has a couple tough guys like him don’t they” Robert says patting Harold on the back “your kick barely cut his skin”

(this is why i dont copy and paste after typing on word all the spacing and indentation is gone -.-)

(good job x3 really interesting can't wait to read more)

(lol you always so up when i finsh xD thanks )

np and ya it must be my fangirl senses i all ways know XD)

(good job Guy)

(thxz :3)

(can't wait to read more)

(great i like how you involved the yakuza... and your action sequences are nice)

Harold blinked for a few seconds in disbelieve he had spent hours every day for the past year training his kicks and punched to be as sharp as a freshly cut knife he even mot to the point where he could make blades made of sun flame. “What the fuck is that guy there is no way anyone in the yakuza is so strong”. He had started to notice people around him whispering things like ‘that guy beat up the whole discipline committee’ or ‘wow they’re so weak’. Harold became slightly mad and walked up to a group grabbing two of them by their shirt collars “you’re the only weak ones here” he said before he was kicked in the face by one of them and they screamed out “ROIT” and all the students who witnessed the attack started fighting the discipline committee, Harold become really mad and jumped in the air curled up in a ball and blades came out of all points of his body stabbing rioting students in legs and arms, he sort of looked like the sun in the sky blinding some students, the rest of the Dc were too busy to stop him because they were trying to hold off other students then a hooded guy appeared (http://m174.photobucket.com/image/roxas%20with%20hood/xuete/kingdomhearts24we4.png.html?src=www is not Roxas ) he runs up one of Harold’s blades and does a flip kick sending him on the ground making a rather large impact creator. When he lands he disappears, or he was so fast it only seemed like that. He did a long combination of kicks knocking rioting students out. He stands still and Liliane charges at him slashing away on the 11th slash he uses his palm to push the blade away and then punches her in the stomach, throwing here in the air then kicking her face so hard that she went flying into the rest of the group. He then makes a sound of annoyance and disappointment and disappears. Harold gets up holding his rib cage which was broken “who was he” he says the rest of the group nods there head saying in unison “I don’t know”. Harold walks away.

(im really lazy so this is short and not done well srry)

(so who was it)

(can't tell you :3 )

(aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww, don't be like that)

(i have to i cant ruin the surprise :3 )

(aw so short but better then nothing =V good job guy i am amazed at your determination to post. when i am lazy i usually have no motivation to do anything XD)