Naruto Character: Kotetsu

Name: 鋼鉄 Koutetsu (steel)

Village: いわがくれのさと Iwagakure no Sato (Hidden Rock Village)

Sex: Male

Age: 22

血継限界 (Kekkei Genkai): かねトン kaneton (metal element)

Rank: 抜け忍 Nukenin (missing-nin)

Appearance: Black clothing. Large trench coat jacket, black armor underneath. Black hair, black eyes, gray skin.

Summary: He left the Hidden Rock Village as a terrorist who hired himself out to other villages for sabotague. Fought Deidara 2 years ago and lost. Currently at large in the Fire country.

Bio: He is able to manipulate and create any metal to any form, and considers all his creations to be the higest form of art. Because of this, he got into a fight with Deidara about the true nature of art, but he lost and fled nearly dead. Current whereabouts are believed to be in the Fire country, near Konoha. His intentions are unknown, but assumed dangerous.

Techniques:
かねトン: 液状の金属の術 Kaneton: Ekijou no Kinzoku no Jutsu (Metal Element: Liquid Metal Technique)
Enables him to melt into a liquid metal form. Can be used offensively and defensively
かねトン: 金属分身の術 Kaneton: Kinzoku Bunshin no Jutsu (Metal Element: Metal Clone Technique)
Creates a solid copy of himself that cannot be detroyed unless blown to pieces.

more to come soon! please comment and give ideas! thanks!

interesting but how is this a fanfic. i mean mine is a fanfic

im still working on it

yeha like i said read mine and tell me how it is

Prologue (2 years before):
"Tell me where he is!" Kotetsu tightened his grip on the villager's throat
"I swear I don't know," choked out the unfortunate villager, "but I think I know someone who does...COUGH COUGH!"
Greed appeared in Kotetsu's black eyes as he registered this information. Could he finally be closing in on his quarry? But pessimistic thoughts creeped into his head. What if he is lying?
"If you are lying to me, forget about killing you, I'll torture you for the rest of your pathetic life!" he screamed.
"I heard he left the Iwa several years ago with some other men in cloaks," said the villager. "I'm not sure where he is now, but there are certain rumors that he has joined an orginization called 'Akatsuki.' That is all I know."
"And where can I find this 'Akatsuki' orginization?" Kotetsu began to sweat.
"I... I don't know," sobbed the villager.
Veins popping in his head, Kotetsu pulled his left arm back and ran it through the villager's heart. Dropping the body, he turned to the setting sun and screamed to the heavens "DEIDARA! I WILL FIND YOU! AND WHEN I DO, YOU'LL BE SORRY!"

Good so far

Ooo, Contiue, I like the writing style you use!

thanks! Sorry about no posts for a while, but i wont be able to continiue the story until next week =( oh well, what can you do?

Thats Ok, its good.

oh sh$%! i just realized i mixed katakana and hiragana in the names! oops...

btw im having a sort of writers block.... oh well. its not like i have a deadline to finnish this thing hehehe....

That's okay we forgive you ^__^

whew! i thought you were going to start a riot (and i probably shouldnt be giving you any ideas...)

Why do you say I will cause a Riot? O___o
I am not that mean am I?

Lol nope, I dont think your that mean.

The Fanfic is awsome! ^^ Keep going!

hey you just changed the name kitetsu the sword which eats souls for that name.

Said By Vincent. Valentine

hey you just changed the name kitetsu the sword which eats souls for that name.

....um, what? :S

You should go on with the Fanfic ^^