Fan Fics

Ok I wrote a Fan Fic and i would like Somebody to read it...I hope you like it


http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/51197


Read it and review

Also if you have a Fan fic post it and i will read it

I just put my first fic up ^^ http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1736789&time=1077033778

Yes its good and so is your aika

Thanks Wolfwood ^_^ and don't you have any fanfics to show?

You guys should read my Strifes and the Wallaces series. Good stuff, good stuff.

Well then let us read it.

Thanks ^^

Whats that? Is it FF7?

Eeeeeeeyup. I don't have a direct link, but it's on Fanfiction.net in the FinalFantasy7 section. Keep in mind, some are VERY OLD, so yeah. Also read Odditivity and what I have of Poo Llama (all in FF7).

My pen name is: Cloud Stryfe

Sad to say but no

sure, Im going to go there in like two minutes

just make sure you make them interesting.

Who're you directing that at?

I think he was directing that to you. But Im not sure.

I certainly hope not, because if he was, it wouldn't make any sense.

Yea, but its not like he doesnt make any sense.

Yes, it is like he doesn't make any sense. Baka gaijin

I'm sorry but I couldn't finish your fic. I spent more of my time trying to figure out what the hell you were trying to say with your crappy spelling than what you were doing in the plot. Holy crap man!

hmm well it needs a lot of work . .you need more detail, and the characters are "out of character" . . .You need to learn how to spell tetsusaiga. (and your spelling could use some work as well) I dunno it has the potential to be a good story, but I really don't know where to start. I mean the plot is clear for those who have watched or read inuyasha, but for someone who has never heard of it, they would have no idea what you were talking about with the jewels, the demons, and everything else.

Being a writer, I despise everything about Fan Fics.
They are lazy attempts at writing a story using some one else's setting, characters, and at times, plot.
There is nothing remotely unique or interesting about any of them, because there was nothing remotely unique or interesting to begin with.
My advice; Take the time to create your own setting, to develop your own characters, and to create your own plot.

That being said, Trojin, do you know anything at <i>all</i> about writing?
I read the first chapter of your fan fiction, as painful as it was for me, and I've got to say that you definately need to pay more attention in English Class. Writing dialogue in interview style is neither correct nor 'cool'. The absence of quotes is also quite annoying.
When describing action, please DO NOT USE ACTION SYMBOLS. You are not role playing. You are writing. Well, you're trying to write, but what you're actually doing is raping a potential (albeit uncreative) story you could have had others read. Try to take the time to write paragraphs instead of lines, sentences instead of words, and letters instead of symbols. This should increase your writing skills by nearly 40%. Trust me, you need it.

Aika, I took a look at yours. I will first compliment you on your nod to grammar and spelling as it was quite a relief from the above story. But you seem to have the same problem as Trojin in writing one dialogue in interview style, using action symbols to describe actual actions. Although I did see a paragraph or two in there (WOO!). Some times your very descreptive with your setting, and some times you just allow it to chop from one place to the next. Try to keep an eye on this as you want your paper to flow nicely. You've got potential.

Jaego... I didn't look for yours. I will eventually though. So be ready.

Uh-oh! Just a few heads up, feel free to flame me about them anyway, but I'll just tell you.

The first Strifes and the Wallaces were made four years ago. I was ten, the writing is most likely lacking. More recently is the fourth episode, that's probably a bit better, but it's only a third complete.

Odditivity is a little better, it has actual paragraphs and setting descriptions (unlike S&W, which is in script form, sorry), but was still made a very long time ago. Expect a lacking story and few typos (like 'cna' instead of 'can' and 'teh' instead of 'the').

Poo Llama is made in Odditivity's form, but is very, VERY stupid. That's all I have to say.

My most recent piece of writing (not a fanfic!), I had to write for English class, I got 110/100 on it, so I guess its pretty good. It's my own version of 'The Odyssey', that was the project. UNFORTUNATELY, I can't attach it for some reason, if you know how could you please tell me? If you're going to read my stories, I'd like for you to read my best.

Reduce it to a universal text format. Liek dis hurr &darr;

Lol, it looks ugly in .txt format, but ooookay...
OKAY, now it's too big! I'll just post it on Deviantart and put up a link...







Jesus Christ...